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Fossils - Mary Anning Character Descriptions

19 May 2016

In English we've studied the Story
'The Fossil Girl'.

We wrote character descriptions about
Mary and her brother Joe.
 
We described their feelings, physical features, family life, hobbies etc.

Here we are reading some of the descriptions. 

   
 
The rest of the class had to listen very carefully as they had to make comments about our writing.  
 
Verbal Peer Assessment:

Excellent use of conjunctions to connect sentences. 
Your voice was loud and clear and we could all hear you reading.
You used a lot of vocabulary from the text.
Very accurate description of Joe. 
I like it that you wrote about Mary's feelings that changed at the end. 


 
 

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